The book at a hardbound 156 pages is rather
attractively put together. Much of the material is
a repetition of already existing material (world
views of the Orlanthi etc) but most of it
is new, making it worth having (even if my niggardly
instincts felt the hardback was unnecessary).
There are a few errors (such as the description of
Votankiland as "Balazar" - the hero of that name
didn't arrive in the area until a century later) and
some rather needless repetition of the old
Glorantha:CotHW material (Yuthuppa is more
famous for its star scribes than its fires and
its city god is far older than the dawn age).
FUN STUFF:
- Vadrus is alive (G:tSA p155). Yay!
- The Timinits
- The Death Kings (G:tSA p30).
STARTLING STUFF:
- Gilam D'Estau is described as being an still
living advisor to ShangHsa (G:tSA p35) rather
than his dead father incarnated within himself.
- The Haragalans are part of the God Learner
Empire and worship the Invisible Vith. Nothing
is said about the Valkarians. The Eastern
Seas Empire still exists but controls a
smaller part of Vithela than previously stated.
- Loskalm is still under the control of the God
Learners whereas it had revolted successfully
several decades before (855-865 ST). I could
understand it if the God Learners had invaded
again but no mention is made.
- The heresy of the Mari Dwarves is not
Vegetarianism but Missing Partism (Mostali
Shamanism in other words). Vegetarians
are not mentioned but probably are found
in the Elf Empire.
- Galanini in what is now Jonatela.
- The EWF is active in Pent!
- Where is Sir Ethilrist?
- No Print in Hendrieikiland! I knew the Larnsti
were good in hiding the secrets of their land
from the God Learners but I didn't realize they
were that good.
- The Utoni (those that worship the right and
left hands of the Invisible God) are secretly
Carmanians.
- The cult of Caladra and Aurelion has no assets
of note described in either Slontos or Jrustela.
- The Rathori have access to the White Bear.
I didn't think they had it that early.
ISSUES:
- The detail of treatment given to many places is
uneven. Some places are described in detail out
of proportion to their impact while others receive
only scant attention. Kethaela, a major battleground
between the EWF and the God Learners only
receives two pages while Kralorela recieves
despite it being far from the centres of power -
it's about as prominent on the world stage
as unmentioned Kalabar or the Elf Empire.
- The Zistorites are mentioned in many places
that a description of them (and their technology)
in the God Learner overview would have been
useful.
- Bija (the ancestor of the Yggites) has been
left out of the description of Fronela. Likewise
Eastpoint, the easternmost extent of the
God Learner Empire in Loskalm has been
omitted.
- The text isn't quite aligned with the map in
some places (the map of Brithos has several
unexplained placenames while the Vent is
described as Aurelion [sic] in the text and
Veskarthen in the map).
- Arolanit is described without any mention of
its Brithini inhabitants (although its Brithini
past is mentioned elsewhere in the text). Where
did the modern Brithini come from then?
- The Praxians and Agimori are given their overviews
despite them having little influence in the current age.
I think that the space devoted to them could have been
replaced with treatments of the Fonritans and the
Masloi as they are far more likely to interact with
foreigners.
- The Safelstran writeup pays scant attention to the
Arkati. For the guiding faith of the Autarchy and the
leading conspirators of the God Learner doom, I
would have expected them to be treated by a cross
between the Mafia and Al-Qaida. As it is, there's
only the Chaos Monks and nostalgiac drunkards
(the Sons of the Autarchy G:tSA p155).
- EWF Factions: Where are the Here-and-Nows or
the Forwards? Where for that matter is Isangdrang,
Alakoring or Ingolf?
- EWF "Pyramid Scheme" (G:TSA p27). For the EWF to
be a pyramid scheme, there has to be some element
of unsustainability built in that will eventually crash the
entire network. There isn't any and the result is that
the EWF is no more a pyramid scheme than medieval
europe. There is a pyramidial hierarchy but to describe this
as a scheme carries the connotation of the EWF being
fraudulent.
- The Elf overview only mentions Errinoru as a historical
event without any impact that his empire or philosophy
has on them. Errinoru's Empire is a major empire of the
age, carrying the same flaws as the God Learners, the
EWF or perhaps the Eastern Seas Empire.
--Peter Metcalfe
Received on Sun 29 Oct 2006 - 07:46:40 EET